For content, I need to make sure that I don’t include topics
that are specific to LDS culture. For example, not explaining what a mission
it, maybe a Patriarch or a Patriarchal blessing. I need to either take these
out and refrain from using specifics in such a way OR explain what these are in
a simple manner.
As for form, I will need to focus on better rhythm and
description. Right now, the format of the paper is good, but I need to make
sure that the text flows. Another thing I should look at or do is read the
paper out loud and figure out what flows and what doesn’t. There are some lines
that could have better diction.
The images are going to be greyscale to reduce the warmth of
color, but I need to find a better initial image. I may use my final image at
the start and find something else for the ending. Each image should relate to
the heading (which I also need to include) of each section.
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