Content:
Dr. Burton and I discussed that the multiple ideas present in my draft can be confusing to readers. I’ve decided to make that which I love the main focus: dirt bike riding. Unfortunately, this means a lot more writing. I want to start out expressing an observation; since joining the church, everything seems to "mean something," that i'm supposed to find purpose in everything, but
before I was a member, there wasn’t really an underlying meaning in riding, it
was just fun, and I liked that.
Form: Dr. Burton and I talked about how I am focusing on
style and form, rhythm and diction, but as he pointed out, that comes second. I
need to be focusing on content, characterization and description. I will be
focusing on expressing what it is that really makes me love riding.
Visual Design: We discussed a range of images, but also that
I need to do a bit more writing before selecting the images I want to
incorporate. I will break the text, inserting a jump break into the text to
make the overall layout more aesthetically pleasing for a webpage.
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