Tuesday, October 15, 2019

Ana's Sketch Reflecting Belief


As soon as Mary walks through our front door, the only comment she can make is, “Your family has a lot of musical instruments! Do you all play?”
“Kind of. Everyone in my family can play the piano at least, but then we each have our other instruments we lean towards.” The stack of instruments in the corner of our living room, full of strings and woodwinds, gave away the fact that our family was musically inclined. We were that family who was always asked to give all of the musical numbers in sacrament meeting during church when they wanted one, but didn’t know who else to call. We knew there were other people, but they never came forward and admitted it in public. If someone didn’t play at least the piano or sing in the choir, they felt like an outcast. My mom had this rule in our family: you had to take piano lessons for at least five years growing up, then you were allowed to quit, or move on to another instrument. My brother quit, while I started learning the violin.   
The moment we moved to a new place, it was always the same situation—as soon as the word was out that we could play and sing, the following Sunday we were doing a musical number in church.

3 comments:

  1. This kind of sounds miserable.. for me at least. I am interested to see where this goes - if it turns into a positive or if this is an into to something more dramatic and hard hitting.

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  2. I like how you include some of the back story here so that the reader can understand how important this is in your life. It is clear that music plays a large part of your life and I am interested to see how that has impacted your life in this essay.

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  3. This was pretty relatable to me haha, it seems like this kind of thing happens often outside of Utah. You did a great job with the dialogue.

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