Ina Coolbrith’s “Millennium,” is an overall
sense of darkness because of the word choice she tends to use, then, near the
end of the poem, she uses a turn with “Be still.” The poem is an opportunity to
express Ina’s views of the Millennium. The audience would need to be one who is
familiar with the idea of the Millennium, so they are able to recognize the
idea, and can compare and contrast their ideas with Ina’s.
The title of the poem, “Elect
of Elohim” by Orson F. Whitney is interesting, as someone might not understand
what it means until they start reading the poem. The structure of the poem has
dialogue, which invites the reader to take part in the poem more. At first, “the
voice” has no name attached to it, which allows a sense of mystery, but then,
later, the reader discovers Michael, Christ, and Lucifer are involved in the
conversation. At the beginning, silence is mentioned several times within the
same stanza, which adds to how the atmosphere surrounding the poem may be seen.
The poem is written for an audience more familiar with the story—some key
instances is how Whitney uses his word choice; for example, Kolob. Not very
many people can recognize that word. He also subtly hits at other references
from the Bible, such as “A prince in shepherd guise.” He continues to do
so, throughout the poem—hinting towards both Old and New Testament references.
It is interesting that you find an overall sense of darkness because of the word choices. I do agree that she did use some heavy words to describe the millennium, but I find them as more interpretations of scripture. The manner in which the millennium is describe seems to be something dreadful, but I read this in more of a glorious and exciting time. I think the point of view in which you read this poem can change its effect.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your view on "Millenium" I definitely got the dark, morose vibes from Coolbrith. I found that the structure of the poem also gave it a lowering attitude.
ReplyDeleteI like what you noticed in that first poem about darkness and being still. To me it is a metaphor for how we should be in some of our trials. Being still in darkness requires patients and a core understanding that God is not only there, but that He has a plan and it will all work out. Thats how we should understand the Millennium. It's going to happen, but as long as we are working in the present to prepare for it, it'll all be okay.
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